Too much flashing
I liked the style and drawings, and I thought the song fit them both very well. My only complaint is that the flashing is a bit too much and was making me feel woozy towards the end. You should also check your text because I saw weird spaces here and there in the middle of words. Overall, I thought it was cute and endearing. Good job.
Thank you for the review :-)
Music carrying animation?
The animation was boring, and it looked like you were relying on the music to carry it.
Only confusing graphics?
No plot, no reason, no sound, no entertainment value... It would have been nice to see you spend a bit more time and shape this into something. The graphics were fine but confusing because of the lack of other things.
A few recommendations to improve what's there.
I don't mind the rip off so much, but...
The action moves a bit slow.
I can't recall if those sounds were from Mario but it would have been cool if they were.
The dialogue could have more tone if you wanted the differentiate the characters, and voices would have been preferable.
Choose a different program to fight in that would have been more ironic or appropriate. The CMD screen would have been more amusing. Flash references are a bit hackneyed.
Best of luck!
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